Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale, while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some people that nations should resolve their environmental issues at their own-level, instead of dealing with it at a global scale, while there are others who think that nations should collaborate to solve issues such as global warming and increasing levels of carbon pollution.
In my opinion, environmental problems faced by nations is a global issue and should be solved by collaborating on a global forum, where each nation can discuss it's ideas to tackle specific problems. Therefore, the nations who are in dire state trying to solve the problems faced due to global warming should collaborate to solve the problems effectively by keeping aside their animosity towards each other.
On one hand, if we think then the earth is one global space and even though people belong to different nations, separated by boundaries, the problems faced by everyone are similar. Firstly, the developing nations can learn from the flaws of developed nations, as they plan their advancement towards industrialization. This will be a guiding path to the underdeveloped nations, since taking preventive measures is better than later making corrections in the system or finding cure to the problems. Lastly, issues like global warming and environmental pollution affect the earth as a whole. The effect can propagate from one nation to another. By collaborating, nations can be of immense help to each other, by not only sharing the solutions to these problems, but also the resources or necessities required to tackle the problems.
On other hand, not all nations undergo same environmental problems. First of all, some nations may not be contributing to the environmental pollution as compared to other nations. They might have already curbed the pollution to great extent and need money to meet other goals, in such cases investing large amounts of their useful resources in solving environmental problems may not be beneficial. Secondly, there are nations who struggle to fulfill the basic needs of people, such as food, water and electricity. For them, environmental problems may not be the priority goal to be achieved as compared to the well-being of the people in the country.
To conclude, environmental problems must be dealt with utmost priority by all the nations to create a better place to live in. We all belong to one global space and together measures can be taken to solve environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22278481013 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96660470414 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4988749899 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9375 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406651695368 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131249390794 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084754993885 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229898322299 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563277323702 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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