The presented diagram elucidates the manufacture of the production of milk and related products.
Overall, it is readily apparent that there are 8 main stages of the process. It starts from cow grazing to transported to supermarkets and shops.
To begin with, cows are grazed in a field. Twice a day, the cows are taken from the pasture to a milking facility where they are milked by an automated milking machine. After that, the resulting milk is kept fresh in large refrigerated storage tanks. Next, the milk is collected by a milk tanker and delivered to a dairy factory where the further process is applied to it in order to create a range of products on a daily basis. Subsequently, some of the milk is pasteurized to kill harmful bacteria and then packaged in cans. Meanwhile, the rest is converted into other dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter. Eventually, the finished dairy products are transported to shops and supermarkets where they may be purchased by the general public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...roducts on a daily basis. Subsequently, some of the milk is pasteurized to kill harmful bac...
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Line 5, column 739, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...kets where they may be purchased by the general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92352941176 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79483582102 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0001388886 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25232561595 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088692559699 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066822781519 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153885796755 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673440660405 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.