In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In many countries, small town-center stores constantly cease trading, and dwellers tend to travel to megamalls. The following paragraphs discuss whether this trend brings more upsides or downsides and reach a reasonable conclusion.
First and foremost, this change can adversely affect indigenous people’s financial state. As for shop owners, they can financially suffer from the decline of customers, some can even shut down the business and go bankrupt. It can be detrimental to the local economy as a result. Moreover, some residents who are too impoverished to purchase cars can have less access to essential goods. Consequently, those who possess no private vehicles may undergo limited access to basic goods or have to purchase new automobiles which likely worsen the environmental state that is already alarming. Secondly, the phenomenon encourages increased traffic leading to higher highway accident rates as well as road damages. Accordingly, local authorities are forced to spend more funds on this issue by cutting funds from other areas.
It is believed that traveling to suburban supermarkets impulses extensive purchase. That means more loads of affordable goods purchased and greater time-saving simultaneously take place. However, despite the time and money saved, people still need to pay for traveling fees and extra fees when they travel far from their homes. Additionally, intense movement causes travelers’ fatigue.
To recapitulate, traveling to suburban stores instead of obtaining essentials in local shops is likely to negatively influence the indigenous economy and transport system. I wholeheartedly believe that the imperfection of the trend apparently surpasses its merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trend apparently surpasses its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, consequently, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, as for, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75984251969 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01832962425 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700787401575 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6927180181 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144912156173 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039375430113 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442006776273 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720398491165 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423756162845 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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