The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
There has been a noticeable reduction in the number of crimes committed recently as opposed to the past. Some assume that advanced technology has been helpful in the investigation and prevention of crime, while others argue that it was ineffective. I stand by the opinion of the premier group, and this essay will provide practical evidence.
To begin with, crime-solving has never become easier thanks to new studies about human biology and genetics. Policemen can analyze collected fingerprint markings and things containing the suspect’s DNA to find the criminal’s identity. Using a fingerprint or DNA database, they can easily identify a specific individual, conveniently shortening the search time.
Additionally, there are various ways to study human movements and prevent some crimes, meaning that people’s actions can be predicted through some algorithms. For example, banks have a coded algorithm to discover any suspicious actions like loitering in a certain area for longer than normal, this has led to a decrease in bank robberies in the past years.
From a different perspective, technology can prevent crime by spreading propaganda to the public, moving towards a more honest society. The popularity of social media has effectively helped the government enforce laws, the citizens acknowledge the result of their actions. Spreading a positive message to do good deeds through the media has done wonders to reduce crime.
To sum up, the new technological lifestyle has many merits and demerits, but in matters regarding the law, not only does it help monitor and prevent criminal activities, but it also cultivates people to be on the right path and stops crime before it happens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36567164179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.931496789 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675373134328 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1300589654 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247975228134 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788240953748 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589629988244 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117506854057 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410862511755 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.