The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
There are a plethora of health issues these days, avoidance of this is vital rather than curing with a remedy or therapy. Government must disburse the finances toward it. I strongly agree with this statement and will elaborate on my views on this in the following essay.
To embark on, healing and restoring health conditions is always followed by the doctors since the beginning, but not all illnesses can be cured. There are a lot of viruses that cannot be cured instead they spread widely without knowing costing many lives. This has increased nowadays, and scientists or medical researchers found it difficult to stop. For example, there was a spread of the Ebola virus in the North-American region where doctors could not figure out the proper medication for it which costed many lives. It may be more difficult in future to prohibit these diseases.
In addition to it, there is a lack of required vaccine for immunity that can protect an individual from these diseases. However, it is expensive if in case it is available somewhere else where an average person could not afford it. Moreover, these vaccines are not effective to withstand a virus or a disease that can spread easily. Governments should focus on preventing individuals rather than affording too much on the remedies which could cure a person. This can be only done if excessive funds are released for this prevention. For instance, if the vaccines are provided for free or at a low cost, everyone can take them. Thus, one can be prevented by these illnesses. I strongly agree that this should happen rapidly to avoid major losses or sudden deaths because of these health issues.
In conclusion, It is agreeable that government should release a plethora of funds for vaccination to prevent one from these diseases or viruses rather than concentrating on therapies or medication. It is recommended that this should be followed in an organized way so that everyone would have access to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 732, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that this should happen rapidly to avoid major losses or sudden deaths because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96060606061 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69854397363 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1184290855 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18387522009 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595774940414 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541694416597 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12459991291 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384828417753 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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