Travelers and business people often come into contact with other cultures briefly. What are the main advantages and disadvantages of doing so?
It is true that businessman or woman and travelers, in general, has the privilege of experiencing various culture around the world. However, because of the nature of the business people could not stay at a new environment for a long period. Although, this phenomenon have many merits, I believe it also has certain disadvantages, which will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, traveling broaden people mind. By exposing to different culture, people could see the different and reflect the homeland culture to another, and thus valuing their own as well as other traditional even more. Although travelers only stay in a new country for a short period, this is also a great opportunity for them to learn any other new language since they could have natural conversation with the native. In addition, for business people, briefly contact with people with different nationalities might provide some insight, which will be good for the business. Furthermore, a bigger employment market is available to them. Google, an International Company, for instance, this is exactly what they need in order to adapt with the globalization trend.
In contrast, overgeneralization is one of the major problem of this trend. Shortly contact with other culture could beget superficial understanding. Normally, this is not a negative thing, however, with certain bad experiences or misunderstanding during the stay it could affect humans thinking, which might lead to conflict between people. Furthermore, another detrimental effect of this phenomenon is that it might spread new and unwanted diseases that is carried by the travelers. So convenience it is for humans to travel from one place to another that a benefactor is the infectious diseases. A great example of it is the covid-19 pandemic that the world are now facing with.
In conclusion, traveling is obviously could have certain benefit, however it could cause several drawbacks which is spreading disease or creating stereotype.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35350318471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03747036464 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6643296575 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186736270166 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061889931874 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574910044455 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100300781628 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633181228303 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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