Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Actions to save the existance of languages become a serious topic as a result to huge lost of several languages in some areas across the globe. However, some individuals believe that life will be better if there are fewer languages. Thus, to have many languages is not important. I personally disagree with this statement because cultural recognation as well as sharing valuable information can only be obtained if we have variety of languages.
I think life will be complicated if there are just fewer languages because languages for some people mean identity. Recognation in society is highly important to build a relation. In Indonesia, languages are symbol of cultural identity among the diversity. The indonesian tend to speak by their own cultural languages to figure out whether there are individuals who come from the same place as theirs in order to built a connection when they travel oversease. Hence, if we let the languages die out, it will cause a huge lost of certain culture. Therefore, having fewer languages will make life even worse.
Furthermore, I think fewer languages can affect communication badly. languages is a tool of communication. So, by having fewer languages will reduce the range of communication, moreover, if there were less interaction, there would be less exchange of valuable infromation. This can have serious effect in research materials. The fewer the languages are available, the less data the scientist will have for research needs.
In conclusion, I genuiley believe that to have variety of languages is important and highly necessay for people, thus, fewer languages will only make life worse.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91011661211 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3064001297 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380590218514 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134166661584 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717505780903 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24158855547 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494753637881 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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