It is true that providing assistance to all people who are in need of help is impossible, so some hold the belief that nations should only address their own issues before taking care of international concerns. Personally, I am in discord with the given statement and believe that it is the duty of each individual to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbors and fellow citizens. In the context of this modern world, it is not difficult to meet a homeless person on the street or a child who cannot go to school due to his disability. In even the wealthiest of cities, for example, Japan, thousands of people have to survive by scrimping and saving on the little amount of money from the government. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, particularly donating money or food, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritize local charity.
At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries, the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. Instead. a small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area. Also, it is a good chance to improve the relationship between different nations as the authorities in richer countries might be repaid after giving citizens in those poorer areas a hand.
In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion, national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.
- The quality of healthcare a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In many countries governments spend a lot of money celebrating national holidays and festivals However some people think that spending money on these celebrations is a waste To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 67
- Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- In many countries governments spend a lot of money celebrating national holidays and festivals However some people think that spending money on these celebrations is a waste To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
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Suggestion: Instead,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77399380805 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6872458654 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2177059216 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272703011352 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948695391646 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575755085362 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171980367208 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346259267578 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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