Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.
Nowadays, the usage of computer extended and students are inclined to play games on the desktop rather than playing outside or outdoor sports. I believe that there are several reasons that why school going childrens are not intrested to play sports and much active on internet to play games. I would like describe the two major reasons of this trend.
Firstly, the variety of animation and various types of games available on the internet which are more attractive to the students. These kind of games involves a lot of stages and also can have a option of multiple players, gives a chance to play with a random person. it is more convenient and easy for them to find people online and play with them from anywhere in the world. Additionally, they can win prizes or more free games on the basis of their performance which made online gaming very popular.
Secondly, some students are likely to be an introvert and they don't want to compete with another students in sports as they feel insecure or afraid of facing crowd in front of them so they avoid such in person gaming situations. Futherly, some are very good at learning subjects but not at playing school sports so they chose to play games on computer.
However, the habbit of playing online games by students can be changed, if schools are supporting them to play sports and it can be added as a some percentage in their grades. Moreover, parents can also provide some gifts when they participate in outdoor sports to influence their interest.
To sum up, I believe that it is very important to play sports as it does not only enhnace the mental and physical health of childrens but can also develop number of opportunities for future in the field of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74834437086 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43517777287 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1514911035 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196080821671 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769291437638 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493229065735 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114216080049 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346842263281 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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