The graph below shows how people buy music
The graph shows 3 different ways for people to access their selection of music. The data tells the total music sales by these methods.
The first method to listen to music is by purchasing the CDs, it appears that CDs sales hit 60% in 2011 and stepping down slowly reaching it lowest at 25% sales by 2018. The music streams course were started to rise in 2011 and hit it highest at 45% in 2018, making streaming music the source of sales followed by downloading it. Downloading music make it out at 45% in mid 2014 and started falling out until it hit 30% of the sales.
In conclusion, CDs are almost lost its popularity to streaming course, people love streaming nowadays because it's easier to access and doesn't cost alot of money the way the CDs are.
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