Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Life skills technically can be acquired from any kind of source. Self-taught skills or through group activities. I agree to the stand of life skills can be obtained from any kind of activities provided by a group of community or an organization. This essay will state the reasons behind my understanding.
What kind of skill set do we get from actively contributing to a certain community? I say we can earn a lot. First, we learn how to socialize with people, which doing things alone can be a struggle. Socialization needs the skill of communicating with other creatures. Public speaking is a very important life skill we can learn during the process of communication within a group or an organization.
Secondly, through group activities, we can understand how emotional factor in humans is too important to be ignored. Learning about empathy and sympathy for instance. These qualities can not be learned if you only hang with yourself, because empathy and sympathy come from connections built between a person to another. Sometimes, deep emotional connections can make one human decent. In order to survive this crowded self-centered world, we need to learn how to live together as a community.
To conclude this, the life skills that we acquire through organization or group activities can be useful for future references such as the skill of communication so does the skill of empathy and sympathy. I will always agree with the idea of working together is better than working alone in terms of learning a life skill.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00389314836 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0263811559 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246904006004 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871417181921 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593015234747 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168371123166 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538918750875 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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