The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Smoking proved to be one of many reasons the lungs lost their function, yet the habit of smoking seems to be favorable till today. This essay will give an explanation of this situation.
I think this phenomenon is caused by the substance contained in cigarettes, nicotine is an addictive yet sedative substance that comes from the main ingredient of cigarettes which is tobacco, as the result, smoking is hard to quit even when they tried relapse is a huge possibility. Another reason is some people believe that smoking helps them relax, and bring warmth to their body in low temperatures. In my opinion, there is one other strong factor played in this habit, the triangular connection between tobacco companies, media, and the government that has been engineering this scenario to plant within society. To simplify it, the scheme is the companies provide the product, the media markets it, and the government regulates it accordingly.
In order to reduce the trend of smoking, the government should enforce the regulations that have been around years ago. Whether enforcing it to the smokers or the companies responsible for this habit yet the smokers are the one who makes the money for them or hold more preventative campaign about the danger of smoking can be so the society could be more aware of this devious habit.
To conclude this, raising awareness of this matter is already been done, but the reality is smoking is addictive and I think the tobacco companies, the media, and the government plays a huge role in this area. Yet the one who can solve this problem in my belief is the smoker itself with the healthy supportive environment and the help of other external factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93006993007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676241164 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3259833446 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282016271566 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106157888559 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581023345242 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1819977937 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276311396816 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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