One of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree

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One of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On one hand, the rise in fuel price might be a brilliant way to decrease air pollution. To make it clear, if the cost of fuel was really climbed up, not many people would afford to buy it, which means there will be fewer vehicles and it is also true to the air pollution. What is more, citizens will soon recognize that it will be a bargain if they have many people go on one vehicle. In other words, public transports like buses or subways will dominate the traffic. For instance, a bus ticket only causes 50 cents and can carry the user around the city.
On the other hand, though there are many great benefits the drawback still prevails. In some ways, a rise in the fuel charge will boost money inflation up. This is because transportation is a very vital part of life, almost every jobs and daily activities use it, so it is easy to understand why everything is more expensive when the fuel costs more. As the result, nothing is changed except the value of money. Furthermore, the daily life of all families will be suffered up because of the increment. For example, they need to rebalance the daily payment because now gas is more expensive, and maybe it will cause them into debt.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, so, still, for example, for instance, in other words, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46330275229 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34798317666 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646788990826 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2835763204 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119408365511 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428221081976 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303999982111 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954579958312 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363026343971 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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