Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
. describe the photograph you sent to the competition
. tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown
. invite him/her to the exhibition
Dear Amit,
I'm very excited to share a good news with you that I won an award for a photography competition.
I clicked the picture of the famous Sealink bridge along with eveing sky and ocean view landscapes in the background. Even though the bridge covers almost one-third portion of the photograph and was initially intended to serve as the main focus element, the orange sun with dawn effect really grabs the attention along with oceanic view. I was immediately mesmerised by this photo and decided to give it a shot at the arts fair.
The arts fair is a national exhibition that displays many arts forms including painting, scupture, drama, dance etcetera. The exhibition is a three day fun activity and people can participate in many events; speaking of which, my picture will be displayed at a large screen at the "Click and Capture" section next to the Oil painting zone. I will be awarded the cash prize money on the last day of the event after evening tea and snacks.
I would be delighted to see you there especially at the awards ceremony as you are the one who motivated me to become a professional photographer. Infact, if you wish, I can register your invite for a three day pass as well because I have a feeling that you would enjoy all forms of art that will be shown here at the exhibition.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Warmest regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Amit, Im very excited to share a good news with ...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
Dear Amit, Im very excited to share a good news with you that I won an award for a phot...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
... was initially intended to serve as the main focus element, the orange sun with dawn effec...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'awards'' or 'award's'?
Suggestion: awards'; award's
...hted to see you there especially at the awards ceremony as you are the one who motivat...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Warmest'.
Suggestion: The Warmest
...Looking forward to meeting you soon! Warmest regards, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, third, well, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74590163934 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6633542874 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3947516456 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171681346144 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056912945773 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482378630791 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079967428045 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523384794469 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.