In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice
In the forthcoming, pupils will be able to pick up their study method. Whether, they may sit in front a screen,use cutting-edge devices or whether they should go to school traditionally, this issue has created a great deal of controversy. Even though, the numerous advantages of online learning can not be denied, I would rather to follow the traditional teaching method with these reasons
To begin, sholars may be more interactive when learning at school compared to online class. Generally, meeting face-to-face is in ability to prompt students to socialize and share more with other peers. Furthermore, school is seemed to be alike a minimized society where students may obviously make friends,have relationships with others and their mood will somehow be affected consequently. For example, going to school every day can improve their knowledge and mood by contacting and sharing with others
In addition, studying traditionally is capable of making students be more serious at schooling. On the ground that the appearance of teachers may limit learners’s unnecessary activities, this will help them pay more attention during the lesson. Unlike online studying, through a screen, students are not able to be observed clearly and may alo be distracted by lots of things. To illustrate, witnessing the schooling of surrounding peole at school can promote themselves and create motivation for a better lesson
To sum up, the latest technologies bring undoubted benefits for learners, yet this can not make them work actually. Therefore, I am convinced that online classes are not a feasible choice. Although inventions in education sector are developed significantly and solve a range of proplems during studying, the most crucial factor depends on learners themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41877256318 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03284766683 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9438730089 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139233721971 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493779415164 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401682557297 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815712632534 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046687982665 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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