In this contemporary era, a vast majority of individuals are sharing their personal credentials to the techno-firms owing to acquire permission to access their software. Although it is advantageous as it makes their life convenient yet there are significantly more pitfalls of data exchange because it gives rise to cybercrime and thefts.
To initiate with, there are numerous demerits associated with giving access to personal information. The prominent drawback is that it leads to growth in cyber crime which is a serious issue throughout the world. By giving allowance to access the confidential content present in the electronic gadgets like phones and laptops authorize the companies to browse and misuse it that poses a threat to humans' privacy. To add more, many reports have been observed in India in which sensitive content of innocent people was uploaded on vulgar sites with certainly degrade their reputation. Besides this, hackers also get to know the location of the person which permits them to plan thievery against him. To make it precise, when the person steps out of his house they can enter and steal from there in his absence. In this way, exchanging data in return of getting access to software could bring out detrimental outcomes.
Furthermore, what merits does this provide to the mankind? Primarily, it preserves precious time and energy of individuals giving them a single click benefit to the desired section. Since many people love to shop, the organisations let them browse the shopping website conveniently. However, the companies merely put forward a condition of allowance to retrieve private data. Shopping websites such as Flipkart Amazon in Myntra are being excessively utilized globally due to the amazing services and quick delivery. So, this is the upside of providing access to data to the technology firms.
To recapitulate, undeniably , people's safety is in their hands so these kind of softwares must be used consciously. Clearly, there are more demerits of the given notion when compared to its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26219512195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81640753494 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631097560976 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8016285182 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.529411765 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319032385613 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857174551461 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707264966527 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162102022082 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530802081031 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.