The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The given line graph and the given table give dates about the average temperature in every month and how many hours in total it is sunny in 3 nations (London, New York and Sydney).
Overall, it is obvious that Sydney has tended to be warmer while this is contrary to London and New York both of which get a great cold at the end of year.
As the line graph suggests, in January, Sydney experiences the relative warmth at 25 Celsius on average, whereas London suffers the cold period with a degree of under 10 Celsius which is higher nearly half of that in New York. In addition, until April, Sydney’s temperature begins to decrease significantly to the lowest levels in July, merely over 15 Celsius. Contrarily, London and New York have a considerable temperature’s rise to the peak of 30 Celsius and close to 25 Celsius at the same time.
In regard to the remaining stage, it is noticeable the temperature change is the same rate of the first months. Particularly, Sydney continues to increase to approximately 25 Celsius which is opposite to the 2 preceding states, they have the same temperature decline to the beginning of the year. In terms of the table, New York has the most time of sunshine with 2535 hours total which is double that of London. Also, Sydney experiences 2473 hours of sunshine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97247706422 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68627237157 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490825688073 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7660073277 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184525940856 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099026555808 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119408938753 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15653321173 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145877209256 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.