some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many believe that the choices in life become more varied. I agree with this statement and I will give the reasons behind it with this essay.
Do you know that our ancestor's only option to share information is only through a letter? It is believed that the first letter was sent by a Persian, and this habit of sending and receiving letters become more popular day by day. Up till today, technology influences society to grow faster, way beyond imagination. There are way too many variables when it comes to choices in everyday life. Take mobile phones as an example, before smartphones were invented, the only sounds related communication option is the wired telephone. Moreover, because of the mobility issue, the use of the telephone became less relevant. Not to mention the variety of smartphones is extremely diverse with all the features it has to offer. It is getting hard to pick one of the many.
Another reason is how life today provides us the opportunity to live the desired. Flexibility within the societal norms and values is becoming more accepted by the majority of the people. Let's take a look at how society used to judge women that dreamed of getting a good institutionalized education. This phenomenon is considered an old-school principle in this era. Equality in education still struggling but the chances are here. There are many women scientists and leaders who are born because of this flexibility. Entangling the chain of primordialism is the choice one has to make.
In summary, I honestly think agreeing with this statement is logical, that whether the technologies or the flexibility in terms of the norms and values could result in the diversity of choices we have to face in life. At the end of the day, our current state was the consequence of our previous decisions, thus we should decide everything wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, in summary, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93269230769 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78334890865 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2086413918 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178542746208 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487583897603 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616920915921 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131011536246 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818142304054 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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