Music has been and will continue to the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is beyond any doubt that music heals pain and break all barriers it is assumed that music turn into a global language and it would connect every human being to each other. I strictly consummate with this notion and also describe my perception on it.
To begin with, every human being whether one is at eighties, one is youngster or toddler love to listen music, rhythms. The reason is ,that it soothes our soul and provide relief from stress. Moreover, music has no boundaries.Each and everyone love to have a taste of song despite of the nationality of the singer, religion and culture.Consequently, it assists to plummet the wall of discrimination basis on races, caste and burgeon brotherhood. Apart from this, it has been recorded that doctors are using malodies, vocals of songs to pacify a mentally disturbed person and using it as a therapy.
Probing further, music assist make sweet bondings among Nations. For instance, when distinct artists perform and organise their shows, concerts in different parts of the world, relationship boomed and it bring prosperity and peace in the world. Besides this, it will rise employment which will be prolific for any country. In addition to this, music is the prominent source to explain culture, traditions to others and people will become respectful to one's culture and rituals.
To conclude from above confabulation it is axiomatic that music has changed the world's criteria of thinking and bring peace by dominating terror and fear as well by becoming a stress buster in people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.046875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8006695628 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5743857544 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112736697724 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391302158943 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031854605308 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629145052436 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233822037164 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.