Some people think that childhood is the best period in a person's life.
Some people are inclined to believe that the best period of one's life is childhood. Personally, I agree with the above-mentioned statement and in this essay, I will explain why.
First of all, children do not have to care about anything. Only then when they grow up they will have some responsibilities but before that, they are free to do whatever they like to. In this period of life, you do not have to care about taxes, marriage and all the important stuff usually adults do.
Secondly, childhood is the perfect time to discover yourself. Being young gives opportunities and various ways to find something you really like and are good at. You can find out about your hidden talents and explore your abilities. When you become an adult, you will have no time for all that.
In conclusion, I think that childhood is indeed the best period of anyone's life. Children live unworried and the most exciting lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ined to believe that the best period of ones life is childhood. Personally, I agree ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 1977.66487455 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74842767296 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58283134571 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 618.680645161 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0310605936 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240874446414 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110251415217 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189484048252 0.0737576698707 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183924564914 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139382600668 0.0645574589148 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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