You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Anita,
I hope you are doing good. I want to explain you about the reason of changing my profession. I have got employment in another reputed company that is situated on the outskirts of the city and not away from my residence.
There are several sound reasons why i opted a another job for earning huge money. Firstly, i was not interested in my previous job as it was not relevant to my skills and abilities as well as taking responsibilities and job duties was like burden for me. Although i made a lot of efforts to discharge my duties, it was totally different from my areas of interest. Secondly, the office is not in proximity to my home so i have to travel for one hour everyday to come to work. That is why, i decided to seek a new job for me.
Now i have been selected by a trucking company as a office manager. I would really enjoy this work because i am excited to meet new customer daily and customer service is the important part of this job. Therefore, i chose this job. Also, as i mentioned before it is closer to my local area.
I would like to tell you that the company offered me a signing bonus and assure me provide chances of promotion after long years of service. I wanted to inform you about my new career. I hope you will receive my letter soon and write me back soon.
Warm wishes.
Sarbjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anita, I hope you are doing good. I want to exp...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t the reason of changing my profession. I have got employment in another reputed ...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted on the outskirts of the city and not away from my residence. There are se...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from my residence. There are several sound reasons why i opted a another job ...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... There are several sound reasons why i opted a another job for earning huge mo...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... are several sound reasons why i opted a another job for earning huge money. Fir...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er job for earning huge money. Firstly, i was not interested in my previous job a...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duties was like burden for me. Although i made a lot of efforts to discharge my d...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y home so i have to travel for one hour everyday to come to work. That is why, i decided...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... everyday to come to work. That is why, i decided to seek a new job for me. N...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... been selected by a trucking company as a office manager. I would really enjoy th...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I would really enjoy this work because i am excited to meet new customer daily a...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... important part of this job. Therefore, i chose this job. Also, as i mentioned be...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Therefore, i chose this job. Also, as i mentioned before it is closer to my loc...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nted to inform you about my new career. I hope you will receive my letter soon an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33466135458 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48716646963 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1756083716 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187247567293 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645418898385 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458052870007 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119214611317 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418617513568 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.