You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
hope you and your family are doing fine, and I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch recently. I’m writing to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and took a new job recently.
Do you remember that I was working for a consultancy firm and I told you how much I was looking forward to changing my job? Well, I have joined a travel agency last month and the new job is exciting. In my previous job, I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay wasn’t great. So basically I applied for a job at a new company that was looking for people enthusiastic about taking challenges and are interested to travel. I thought it is a good fit for my expectation and took the opportunity.
I was a bit nervous in the interview, but in the end, I got the job as a senior travel consultant. The remuneration in the new job is better, the working conditions are great and I don’t have to work long hours anymore. Besides, they offer performance bonuses and I would be able to travel to different places and explore many places!
I have also enrolled in a diploma course at the University of Edinburgh and started a new travel blog. My parents have come to meet me two days ago and I have plans to take them to show them around.
With love,
Emma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-01-21 | ielts_tony | 73 | view |
| 2022-02-05 | lakhveer khokhar | 78 | view |
| 2022-02-05 | lakhveer khokhar | 75 | view |
| 2021-11-10 | ymck8163 | 78 | view |
| 2021-08-23 | Firdouspathan | 73 | view |
- Today s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Youngsters get famous in early age Is it right thing or bad thing 73
- n some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both sides and express your opinion 56
- Cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade it has made overseas travel much more accessible Expalain advantages and disadvantages 11
- Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
hope you and your family are doing fine, and...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3640167364 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55992414017 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556485355649 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0277693958 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9166666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258299090702 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891704669084 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714105142132 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155282801682 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869051792246 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.