Everybody today should pay a small amount from their income in order to help people who are homeless and / or suffering great poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The importance of charity which is always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming to donate a small amount of everyone's income for the upliftment of needy people. I espouse the notion of not welcoming the statement, elucidating with apt examples.
There are multiparous reasons for my outlook. The most prominent is providing financial assistance would make those people lazy, as they be getting aid without doing some work. Apart from it, the aids may be used for wrong purposes. For example, the money may be used in bad habits like chewing tobacco, smoking, gambling, etcetera. To justify my standpoint, if poor people receives monetary benefits it will restrict their frontiers of development. The government have already levied hefty taxes on citizens and therefore should frame policies to utilize those funds.
The best way to enlighten their lives would be by opening top-notch educational institutions, so that they can earn their bread and butter through education. People can contribute for the basic necessity of life. Aid need not be monetary, it can be in the form of leftover food, old garments, books, etcetera. In addition, employment opportunities are essential to make them stand on two feet.
Taking everything into account, I would reiterate my opine that instead of people offering a small proportion of their earnings. Although government have to allocate their funds in different sectors, yet they prioritize on enacting better policies for the homeless in order to move the people from the state of dependent to independent and sustainable livelihood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33725490196 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84262064272 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674509803922 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.488853559 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165433211883 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522559451988 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376456532133 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097942971271 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355364966158 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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