Tourism is already a big industry, and this is expanding rapidly in many developing countries. Many such countries have taken extensive initiatives to expand their tourism sector and many of them have gained enviable popularity. I believe that the reasons for developing countries to embark on this enterprise are many folds, and this is quite a positive development for them.
First and foremost, popularity around the world is the reason many emerging countries are improving their tourism. They know that prevalence and exposure to the world are the keys to expanding their presence and dominance in the world. For instance, Malaysia is a well-known Asian country, and the expansion of its tourism sector has established its presence on the global map. Second, the tourism industry brings foreign money that can be used for the development of the country. For instance, developing countries like Thailand, China and Spain are earning huge foreign currency from their tourism industries. Third, tourism actually increases the business opportunities of a country and thus many countries are having a better trade relationship with developed countries only because the tourists of the western world came to visit such countries and thought about the business potentials. Finally, tourism creates job opportunities for local people and gives the host country an excellent opportunity to develop their infrastructure.
I believe that, despite some negative effects, the tourism industry offers numerous benefits to a country. Among the negative effects, pollutions, influences of foreign culture and the threat of terrorism are often mentioned. However, in this era of globalisation countries cannot shut their doors to foreigners. So the tourism industry is rapidly enhancing and a country should take advantages of it. Earning foreign remittance, creating jobs for local people, introducing unique traditions, improving the transportation system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that development of tourism can offer.
In conclusion, the main reason developing countries are extending their tourism enterprises is that they understand the immense potential and benefits this industry offers and without any doubt, this is quite a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that devel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, second, so, third, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68895348837 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95304056072 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7398743607 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3125 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208879416081 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791563491411 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395097827857 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13817720772 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275579211335 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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