Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food is a vital need for living, some people like to eat food outside the home, others enjoy eating at home. In my opinion, both ways of taking foods have some advantages and disadvantages.
Eating at restaurants can save a time; food preparing is a time-consuming process, for example washing the dishes, preparing the ingredients and using cookers. Moreover, cooking involves going to the grocery and buying vegetables, meat or fishes and others. Additionally, eating out is a good choice of getting together with friends or spouses. In addition, for the young persons who are not able to cook for themselves, eat at food stands resolve the problem. Unfortunately, eating in a restaurant costs a great deal of money; we should pay for the meals, extra taxes and service charges.
the homemade food is more economic and healthier than ready-made food. It is full of vitamins, healthy carbohydrates and proteins. The majority of restaurants use taste enhancers and additives to make the food delicious. These artificial additives can cause various diseases. We are used to cooking foods according to our needs, for example, someone who is ill needs a special diet of light food rich in nutrients, including protein, vitamins, and minerals. Such requirements can only be fulfilled at home. Regarding hygiene, we wash vegetables, meat, fruits and all our kitchen tools carefully. But we spend a long time in cooking.
To conclude, where a person prefers to eat depends on the choices and requirements. Personally, I prefer to eat at home because homemade food is healthy, economic and hygienic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18076923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9504262053 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6302010136 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2352941176 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388303179928 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107960519517 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10756714742 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252787322122 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814510160891 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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