Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways
What is your opinion?
Intelligence measures change from person to another . There are conflicting opinions about the real measure of intelligence. Some people think that successful people are the intelligence one, while others think there are other measures of intelligence. The best measure of intelligence is thinking out of the box . That’s how you win in this life and spotlights on you. In this essay we will discuss different opinions about the intelligence measures and if success is the real measure of intelligence or not.
Some people think that success is the one best way to show people you are intelligent. You can tell them your successful stories and how you work hard, in addition to overcoming the obstacles that you faced to make their eyes shining.
Most of people seek to be successful not to be intelligent. Their target is to make a lot of money like other successful people whether it will cost a lot of efforts or time .
On the other hand others see that thinking out of the box is the real measure of intelligence. You can attract people attention by smart ideas or easier solutions. That’s how people will called you intelligent and bet on your success.
Nowadays, there are a lot of alternatives of any things that you can imagine. If you work in the same routine circle without thinking out of the box, you won’t be smart enough . Everyday we hear about a new small interesting projects that will make life much easier and faster and will give us better results. These small projects become big ones and transform from alternative options to irreplaceable.
At the end intelligence measures is varied. Regardless you think that success is the best measure , you should consider that thinking out of the box will broaden Your horizon and make you intelligent one. As they say, work smart not hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88311688312 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76443319063 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467532467532 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7335626547 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467776179444 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166421349285 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152623167921 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263539444234 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15785141321 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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