Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
scientific research is the area to seek the truth to clear doubts and find solutions. With the cutting-edge technologies in the 21st century, more and more people concerning about all fields of science. While some people argue that researchers should solve the puzzles of human health, I believe that other different issues have to be solved equally. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why researchers should focus on the world health issue. Firstly, good health can help people work energetically, from that they can make ends meet and improve their living standards. this means that physical well-being is the precursor to a happy life. Secondly, scientific research into dangerous diseases can eliminate the risks that can threaten people's life. For instance, the boom of the Covid-19 has been impacting directly human health. The rate of people infected was always exceeded more than ten thousand cases a day. if it was not for the discovery of vaccines, the consequences that humankind had to face were unimaginable.
On the other hand, there are also more and more issues that scientists should put their effort to resolve. To begin with, researchers should concentrate on the environment which plays an important role in human life. Because the temperature keeps rising, researchers can contribute to the knowledge base to help this situation better. However, if researchers and politicians only tackle a single problem, the others will be neglected and then become more detrimental such as economic issues. For example, the war between Russia and Ukraine causes an increase in inflation. Therefore, from my point of view, all the aspects should be resolved equally. it is depressing that despite a lot of issues, none of those are solved properly.
In conclusion, even though health care is the most essential problem for researchers to focus on, the others cannot be ignored. I believe that all issues should be tackled properly to bump the living standards up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19219219219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70618394416 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9339126492 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.45 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352821892415 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088893390548 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717151833145 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211045586495 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837175109084 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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