The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.

The table exhibits the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Based on the above information, we can realize the change through every subject.
First, Sciences is the subject that has the most male students. In this subject, the percentage of male students is about 22 thousand and female students are over 10 thousand. Secondly, Mathematics has a huge difference in the number of male and female students. The details are: the number of male students is over 15 thousand but female students only have approximately 5 thousand. About the next subject has changed, the number of female students increased gradually compared to 2 previous subjects. It's Social Sciences with about 25 thousand female students and close to 15 thousand male students. In Language and The Arts+ are the number of female students is so high for the number of male students. Besides that, In Literature and Law, there is a difference, male students have a huge number and female students have a tiny number. However, the number of both male and female students is balanced in Humanities. In summary, calculus subjects often have a huge number of male students for female students. But language and art subjects are loved by many female students.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03381642512 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65111336292 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4881261615 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267360514766 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13632269223 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134165689256 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287456075798 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107057298401 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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