The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales in various formats of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011

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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

The bar chart demonstrates the quantity of rented and sold films in different formats, such as rentals, VHS sales, DVD sales and Blu-ray sales from a particular market.
It is noticeable that, the highest statistics were shown in DVD sales after 2004, before which rentals were most popular. However, Blu-ray films were appeared on markets for sale only in 2007, but still had the lowest figures.
On the one hand, about 185,000 films were rented by people in 2002, but then it began to decrease and showed 180,000 rentals after one year. Between 2004 and 2011 it enormously declined from nearly 165,000 to 67,000 rentals, respectively and its place replaced by DVD sales. It was about 46,000 DVD sales in 2002 before experiencing a boom and reaching a peak with over 210,000 sales in 2007. Fortunately it registered a downward trend until 2011.
On the other hand, the number of VHS sales illustrated about 85,000 in 2002, yet it dropped to nearly 10,000 in 2005 and after a year it began to disappear according to the chart. Regarding Blu-ray , it was introduced in 2007, its shares made up about 2,000 in same year and it started to slightly rise , approximately 12,000 Blu-ray films were sold in the last given year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81904761905 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47272411371 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0777023072 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20356438278 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900510865784 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04491748569 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130785587268 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467629049526 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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