The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego California and the rest of the word

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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the word

The three graphs illustrate comparison of water consumption in three different ranges, namely residential, industry and agriculture in two American regions also in the world as a whole.
It is noticeable that the highest statistics were shown in San Diego County for residential water consumption. By contrast, agriculture sector accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.
To start with, 60percent of the whole water usage is responsible for the residential sector in San Diego County, also it comprised 39 percent in California. Regarding industry range, in both countries San Diego and California shares make up 23 percent and 33 percent, respectively. 17 percent of water used for agriculture in San Diego County and 28 percent in California.
On the other hand, the highest percentage among all categories in worldwide usage of water can be seen in agriculture, accounting for 69 percent. Lastly, 23 percent of water used on industry and the rest (8 percent) goes for the household usage

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, regarding, so, to start with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25465838509 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03334604451 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9599662469 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240137606569 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123628098756 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619516926408 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137471435407 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743853995336 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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