In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Progress, is not something that happens suddenly or at once, it needs time. The prompt suggests that people with contrasting opinions Should be given an opportunity to put forth their thoughts on any progressive matter. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the given statement mostly for the given three reasons.
Firstly, contrasting point of view presents the counter point to the presented idea or matter. This helps to check and balance the presented points for the given topic. As a result, flaws of the ideas are determined even before the work begins. For example, in democracy when the ruling party presents any bill in the house, there is opposition to always counter it if they fell it is not in favour of people or country. Ruling party is worker with idea where as the opposition is the voice of people that finds flaws.
Secondly, everybody’s opinion is incorporated for the given issue. So, everything happens with the mutual understanding between the two contrasting parties. For example, when the there was this boarder tension between Nepal and India, the ruling party at that time took confidence of all the opposition leaders and published a new map of Nepal that incorporated the Limpiadhura, Lipulek, Kalapani.
Lastly, efficiency of work increases when the different opinions of all the people that are member of a society, party are included. As, is helps to reach to a better conclusion. Also, there is feeling of gratification among all at the time of output. So be it any social, economic or educational issue both the sides should keep their opinion based on their knowledge, past experience to come at a better output.
Some might argue that, one with the idea should be allowed to work freely as development is not just for a single person or the society it is for all. But, they should be reminded that the to keep every bodies thought on crucial matters sustains the development. So, it is important to have contrasting opinions in progressive matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...untry. Ruling party is worker with idea where as the opposition is the voice of people t...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ember of a society, party are included. As, is helps to reach to a better conclusi...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...their opinion based on their knowledge, past experience to come at a better output. Some might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94328358209 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7265907597 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6369047206 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131369844188 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446628511964 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340060656861 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747424209127 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343237009109 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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