There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Rising in global temperature is caused by usage of automobiles and also harming human health. This essay disagrees because it badly contributes to global greenhouse gases and toxic chemicals. Firstly i will discuss greenhouse gases and secondly toxic chemicals produced by vehicles.
Firstly, the increase in usage of transport’s heavily damaging the global environment by making greenhouse gases, because of this dangerous issue plants are getting in to worst conditions. For example Australia was facing the same problem but they announced that car which has runes for 9 year on road will not be able to use again. As the result it was very good design and benefits country.
Secondly, to explain that engines of car, buses and many more transportation, which is in daily use is of every citizen is dead injurious to health because the amount of poisoned it spreads kills thousands of people. For instance dehli is the most polluted city ever in india it is because fossil fuel in engine chemical gases also it makes this city more threaten to leave in. If responsible departments focus on this issue dehli can come out of this problem.
In conclusion, although use of more cars and fossil fuel is taking global environmental problem to upper level, however government is the key to recover from this serious problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
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...ery good design and benefits country. Secondly, to explain that engines of car...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es this city more threaten to leave in. If responsible departments focus on this i...
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... is the key to recover from this serious problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08675799087 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71549405576 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8693424373 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161432435434 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622513940795 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357327319973 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953751184399 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132172126231 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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