As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
The pursuit of knowledge is a fundamental building block towards growth and advancement for humanity. One that is posed as an inevitable part of evolution. The prompt proposes that with more knowledge, things do net get easier understood, but instead, more mystic. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the statement in the prompt as I do have one reservation about the prompts proposal and two major reasons why I support the aforementioned proposal.
To begin with, there are several fields of life in which deepening knowledge of areas surrounding such fields grants clarity into the field as a whole. One such example is in the field of sports analysis. It's a fact that any bona-fide, employable sports analyst who is 'worth his salt' should be able to rightly predict a greater majority of upcoming sporting events and outcomes. Professional sports analyst are rightly able to predict major upcoming seasonal changes within teams. They are able to tell which teams have higher chances of winning competitions and even predict how long a player would stay out of play after a sporting injury. Such prowess is only possible because of the in-depth knowledge accumulated from being involved with such games. Little wonder why top sports analysts are former players of such games. Former football players such as Thiery Henry and Kanu Nwankwo who advanced to the 'top' of their football careers before retiring are always recalled by major sporting channels to analyze Champion's league (the biggest league in seasonal football). Such top analysis is only gotten from being involved, acquiring knowledge and participation in such games.
There are however spheres of life in which acquisition of deeper knowledge in such areas lead to further obscurity, such that the more you know, the more you realize you don't know. The world of astrology is one of such areas where daily discoveries of new planets and solar systems lead to discoveries of new planetary phenomena never before imagined or seen. Sub-fields such as dark matter and anti-matter energy has proven to be a vast field in which new discoveries are made annually and even more confoundment met like-wisely. There are a lot of undiscovered parts of the galaxy, which remains ever expanding. Scientists have settled on the fact that no amount of space expositions or explorations made would be able to cover the vast lack of knowledge of the unknown. The Ocean, like-wisely is another example of an obscure juggernaut in which new discoveries made lead to further mysteries in the ocean. In fact, oceanographers theorise that less than one percent of the ocean and it's lifeforms have actually been discovered. These two examples point to the fact that gaining more knowledge in some fields lead could often lead down a road of further complexity.
Furthermore, humanity has had several continous ages of discovery throughout history with each new age super-ceding the previous by leaps and bounds. From as far back as the stone age in which our predecessors made tools out of stones and stone carvings, to the iron age, which made the times of the stone age seem derelict. Further down the times where the bronze age also made the ways of preceding times defunct. Humanity has gone down this line at an immense speed, currently at the technological age in which some common ways of the stone age seem like foolishness to today's modern man. This shows a pattern of unstoppable advancement, in which one generation's sturdy and practical way of life is phased out and a newer generation's 'better' way of life sets in making newer ways unfathomable and downright incomprehensible to older generations.
Although fields exist in which knowledge in basic aspects of such field brings clarity unto the broader aspects. This however seems to be the exception to the rule as even the evolution of humanity and the vastness of space and the ocean alludes to the fact that acquiring knowledge leads to# further incomprehension of subject matters.
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- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 66
- Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In deve 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The pursuit of knowledge is a fundamenta...
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... as I do have one reservation about the prompts proposal and two major reasons why I su...
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...support the aforementioned proposal. To begin with, there are several fields ...
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...ple is in the field of sports analysis. Its a fact that any bona-fide, employable s...
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...s a fact that any bona-fide, employable sports analyst who is worth his salt should be...
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...rting events and outcomes. Professional sports analyst are rightly able to predict maj...
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...dge and participation in such games. There are however spheres of life in whi...
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...more you know, the more you realize you dont know. The world of astrology is one of ...
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...explorations made would be able to cover the vast lack of knowledge of the unknow...
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...d down a road of further complexity. Furthermore, humanity has had several co...
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...e times of the stone age seem derelict. Further down the times where the bronze age als...
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...comprehensible to older generations. Although fields exist in which knowledge...
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...comprehensible to older generations. Although fields exist in which knowledge in basi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in fact, such as, you know, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 104.0 58.6224719101 177% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3336.0 2235.4752809 149% => OK
No of words: 661.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04689863843 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07049507093 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76969214242 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 329.0 215.323595506 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497730711044 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1049.4 704.065955056 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4186994493 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6071428571 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131653230553 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367712761696 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679729838369 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825636402821 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694318026662 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 100.480337079 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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