As parts of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals say that in order to learn a specific language and culture of a country, students are recommended to spend several years studying overseas to gain insight. In my opinion, it is a good, yet not the most optimal choice for young people to meet such an expectation in learning.
On the one hand, although studying abroad is a benefit for learners to acquire knowledge in other countries, such movement may cause some difficulties when putting into action. Financial problem, which involves both accomodation and cost of living, is a big barrier considering going abroad. The cost of living in some developed country has to be taken into further consideration as fundamental demands also cost a lot. Additionally, culture shock could be a potential problem for every students when learning in different environments. It could fairly takes a long time for an individual to adapt for a new environment. As a result, young people without preseverance may giving up before they could actually achieve their goals.
On the other hand, students could still able to learn various language and cultures without having to go abroad. Firstly, the fast-growing development of the Internet as well as technology gives young people an easy access to learn from anywhere with any languages they could think of. Duolingo is an example as this application help foreigners study a new languege other than their mother tongue. In addition, people could have a chance to ask for travellers around the globe in their place about the difference between cultures. This is often the case of Vietnamese students as they are taught to speak English with native speakers whenever it is possible. As a result, pupils don’t necessarily have to living abroad to gain such knowledge.
In conclusion, with some barriers regarding financial issues and culture shock, I believe that students don’t necessarily have to studying abroad to learn new languages and cultures as it could easily be acquired right in their hometown thanks to the Internet and travellers around the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...different environments. It could fairly takes a long time for an individual to adapt ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...s well as technology gives young people an easy access to learn from anywhere with any languag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, still, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16964285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81772788244 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2883242468 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131286926856 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047042759277 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516302718329 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928676009972 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177706266394 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.