claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
T. V. news show keeps us update with latest headline either it is related to politics or any serious issue happening around the world. Nowadays, news channel is also showing interest toward the publicity of celebrities by broadcasting news related to them, as a entertainment source for the public. The prompt emphasize the negative side of the media by stating one of the reasons. I mostly agree with the claim because of the two reasons which I will elucidate in the following essay. However, I do concede that as everything has it own pros and cons, in same way, media can also prove beneficial to the society.
If any person helps someone in difficult situation then he/she is personified as their Hero/ God Angel. Similarly, in any dangerous situation, a person takes courage to help the public. Then, it is true that he/she become a hero for them. Even media praise them by telling the story of how courageously he/ she had acted in such perilous scenario. Later, such publicity and praise, through media, becomes a nightmare for the city hero. After the incident, that person does not remain as a normal person. He/ she become a celebrity for the news media which also influence the other social media platform and this will lead to affect their reputation. Usually, normal people avoid to interacting with any social media platform because they consider it as attention seeking and very disturbing. For instance, When the same person who was marked as Hero for all, do anything which goes opposite to his/her behavioural conduct then media will make it as a issue and portray it in negative way without knowing the reason behind such action by that particular person. Earlier, who was a superman for everyone becomes a devil for all because of one unintentional mistake and the reason behind is the way media show it to the public. Any social media can diminish anyone reputation in less than a one minute because major of the public believe everything which is broadcasted in the world without have any detail research. Therefore, Media can even destroy reputation of the same person whom they had once considered as a most sensational person on the social media platform.
Moreover, when a person becomes a sensational figure, his/her privacy get hampered through social media. Nowadays, apart from the global issues, media also cover celebrity daily chores as part of entertainment source for public. Therefore, Hero, of the city, also comes under such case. He/she get the invitation to take part in the global debate to share their review. He/ she get the invitation to even take part in the political events so that media get benefit from TPR. Any social media does not care about other person life. All they wants is latest news for their channel or platform either it is related to any popular personality or any local person. Any human, who was made as hero, ever wanted to get entitled as such. All they want is to help the people in the need and for they have come forward. But, It get exaggerate through social platform and this totally changes a normal person life.
However, It is, sometimes, become beneficial when a person is being praise for his/her good deed. This will not only help to spread the moral value among the society but also remember by many for longer time. When a person good action is broadcasted on the social media, many people listen to it and praise them. Even try to follow their action. This help to make a better society.
Thus, in the conclusion, I would like to say that I mostly agree with the claim because media most of the nightmare for the people. Nevertheless, it also has some benefits. People learn about moral values which help to make a better community.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
T. V. news show keeps us update with latest headline either it is related to politi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y broadcasting news related to them, as a entertainment source for the public. Th...
^
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... I do concede that as everything has it own pros and cons, in same way, media can a...
^^^
Line 2, column 942, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...behavioural conduct then media will make it as a issue and portray it in negative...
^^
Line 2, column 950, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ral conduct then media will make it as a issue and portray it in negative way wi...
^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ity, also comes under such case. He/she get the invitation to take part in the glob...
^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...l debate to share their review. He/ she get the invitation to even take part in the...
^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
... get benefit from TPR. Any social media does not care about other person life. All t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... care about other person life. All they wants is latest news for their channel or pla...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
...about other person life. All they wants is latest news for their channel or platform eith...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...and for they have come forward. But, It get exaggerate through social platform and ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3081.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 642.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79906542056 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46976505444 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443925233645 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 996.3 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9289867344 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0285714286 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3428571429 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48571428571 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189032513687 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512235647183 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450620537266 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109054332824 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402400700976 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
T. V. news show keeps us update with latest headline either it is related to politi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y broadcasting news related to them, as a entertainment source for the public. Th...
^
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... I do concede that as everything has it own pros and cons, in same way, media can a...
^^^
Line 2, column 942, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...behavioural conduct then media will make it as a issue and portray it in negative...
^^
Line 2, column 950, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ral conduct then media will make it as a issue and portray it in negative way wi...
^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ity, also comes under such case. He/she get the invitation to take part in the glob...
^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...l debate to share their review. He/ she get the invitation to even take part in the...
^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
... get benefit from TPR. Any social media does not care about other person life. All t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... care about other person life. All they wants is latest news for their channel or pla...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
...about other person life. All they wants is latest news for their channel or platform eith...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...and for they have come forward. But, It get exaggerate through social platform and ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3081.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 642.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79906542056 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46976505444 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443925233645 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 996.3 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9289867344 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0285714286 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3428571429 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48571428571 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189032513687 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512235647183 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450620537266 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109054332824 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402400700976 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.