Rembrandts painting origin, whether it is actually rembrandts or not?
The author and The lecturer talks about the painting of a famous Dutch painter rembrandt. Passage presents a doubt on one of his famous pantings Elderly woman in a white Bonnet. The author says that they are many errors in the painting which does not match with the actual style of the painter. but, the lecturer opposes by saying that the original painting has been modified, the painting is real.
To begin with, the author argues that rembrandt was very particular about the details of his subjects' clothing but, in the painting, the cap worn by the woman does not match with her status. white line cap which she is wearing used to wear by the servant and it does not match with the luxurious fur collar. this proves the inconsistency of the painting which the painter would have never done. but the lecturer justify and say that, according to, the expert panel, the painting was modified. someone had added fur color to make it like a real painting.
Further, The author mentions that the painter was a master of painting light and shadow. In the painting, the light on the woman's face opposes the shadow on the fur collar. To contradict this statement, the lecturer state that this difference is due to fur collar painting which has been recently painted by someone else.
Lastly, The author talks about the wood panel used in the painting. according to the author, examination of the painting reveals that the painting is made on several pieces of wood. but, rembrandt never used glued wood panels before. While the lecturer says that the wood of the piece was used on the side of the frame and the actual painting is made on the single wood panel. Further, she verify that the same wood was used by the painter for his other paintings
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ting is made on several pieces of wood. but, rembrandt never used glued wood panels...
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... on the single wood panel. Further, she verify that the same wood was used by the pain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70454545455 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23637674024 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.469502722 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219300609727 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758737898133 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660754880395 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144250770908 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687960466517 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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