It is believed by many individuals that computers are the most crucial innovation invented in the last hundred years. As for my personal perspective, I partly agree with this view.
Given the proven advantageous functions of computers towards the rise of our civilization, it is irresistible that the invention of computers had led society a hundred years ahead. Without computers, people would not be able to access several advantages. The first to be mentioned is the connection of individuals with the rest of the world within a click. People are effortlessly finding information compared to the time when going to the library was ubiquitous. Therefore, our work is supported and becomes more efficient. The next function is distant contacting. The situation of persistently waiting for letters to be replied is no longer exists. A person can simultaneously work in Asia while communicating with his counterparts in Europe. Last but not least, automatical facilities associated with our convenience are monitored by computers.
Despite the numerous benefits, computers are hard to be confirmed as the most superior inventions in the 21st century. In the alerting situation of the Covid-19 epidemic, the vaccine should be privileged. Specialists have announced that vaccine is the mere solution to deal with the risk to international health. Another remarkable innovation is a medical modern technology used for health-threatening diseases such as cancer. Scientists have developed technologies that can use to inhibit it without fain suffering, for example, the X beam which has been proven to phase out the mortality. Hence, it is subjective to affirm a computer's position since there are several effective aids.
In conclusion, computers indeed play an irreplaceable role in our society but not only it has a crucial role as there are ingenious inventions existing.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Although there is a lot of translation software available learning a language still could be advantageous To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done 84
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41780821918 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24455170734 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7571824001 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182199056182 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504204018466 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447565524024 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11422985238 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604741843799 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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