the bar chart below shows the scores of teams A B and C over four different seasons

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the bar chart below shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons

The chart illustrates the points of three teams which are scored in seasons 2002, 2003, 2004 and 2005.

Overall, the point of team B was the highest over four years, the opposite was true for the scores from teams A and C. While the score by team A was always lower than team B, in the last two years team A had the points higher than team C.

In 2002, team B had 82 points which was the highest score of the three teams, while the score of team C was 10 points and the point of team A was less than two times of team C. There was a slight increase in the scores of team A and C, respectively 11 and 15 points. By contrast, the year 2003 witnessed a marginal decrease of 22 in the point of team B.

In 2004, the point of team A was higher than the point’s team C, respectively 35 and 12 points. Meanwhile, the point of team B saw a slow fall to 43 before experiencing a steady growth of 12 in 2005. At the same time, the figures for teams A and C went down considerably below 10 points.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01507537688 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24234371827 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447236180905 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.45097560976 69% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4789690598 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258063737382 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133189130901 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637349190364 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189503522258 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496088650447 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 99.91 61.2550243902 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 11.4140731707 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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