Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, many people can buy foreign products easily, so many countries are similar and the specialties of the country have appeared over the world. The benefit of that is that people can enjoy the specialties of the other country conveniently and do not need to travel to the country. However, this thing makes people cultural loss.
Buying overseas goods is very popular around the world because it is very convenient to buy them. With the advanced technology, people just access the Internet or download shopping applications such as Amazon or Alibaba. For example, if I want to buy a dress from China, I just need to download Alibaba and sign up by my email. After that, I will transfer the money into their account and type my address. After 2 weeks, my dress is delivered to my house. People do not spend time going to the shop. Nowadays, the Corona pandemic is happening, so limiting face-to-face contact is very necessary. Therefore, governments do not worry about the economy which is affected by the corona pandemic. It is very difficult to move to other countries because governments ban people to enter a country when the number of people infected with coronavirus is more and more. Another point worth noting is that people can enjoy the specialty food of the foreign country easily. For example, at KFC or McDonald's, people can eat fried chicken in the restaurants and do not worry about the taste. There are two main benefits of free trade.
Many specialties of a country can be sold in the other countries. Therefore, people do not feel exciting when they travel to foreign countries. They enjoy and know the taste of the special food of that country. The country will not make them feel curious or interested when it is very easy to eat at home. They do not need to travel to the other country. Tourism will be affected when buying foreign goods happening more and more. Furthermore, buying goods online is very dangerous. Many people can cheat the customers when they can edit the images of the products simply. They just see the images of the products on the Internet and do not know the real products. In addition, many people can give them a link to transfer money for the. However, the link is very dangerous because it can take the total amount of the money in credit.
In my opinion, buying through the Internet is very useful for people. They do spend a lot of time and money going to the shop. Furthermore, they can avoid bad things such as rain or vehicles. However, people just should buy on the famous websites and shops. If anybody sends a strange link, people should not access this link. People can lose money when they transfer their money into another account through a link.
In conclusion, this thing can bring both advantages and disadvantages for people if they are not careful. The main benefit is buying goods easily and conveniently. In contrast, people can take a risk when they transfer with strange people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 514.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75097276265 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48732802593 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412451361868 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 16.0721442886 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5125569954 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7714285714 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34285714286 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284684188827 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073367190728 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582065961273 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182314279359 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556752826044 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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