Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
drawbacks, I believe that this development brings more positive results.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages for the argument of some countries are now less different from others since people are able to buy merchandises all around the world. Firstly, it makes citizens cost millions of dollars when they get what they want that does not exist in their country and do harm to the environment as well. Taking goods from another nation will request people to spend money on either travelling to that nation or delivering from that nation by trains, airplane, etcetera which will release carbone dioxide as using too much fossil fuels. Secondly, when a nation become more and more similar to another one, it leads to the emergence of a new issue which is the disappearance of a culture, as residents cannot remmeber what makes the difference of that country.
On the other hand, I assert that the consequences of this hot issue are positive developments. First and foremost, it allows consumers to have various choices for any kind of products which can satisfy their needs. For example, a girl who is considering to buy cosmetics can think of local brand, like M.O.I, or global brand, such as Dior, 3CE. Apart from this, people who would like to move to another country to start a new life can get used to with that strange region as fast as possible because they an feel the familiar atmosphere from their home country. To illustrate, in the USA, there are some regions where several Vietnamese families live there called Vietnamese’s communities which will let the new comer feel peace in mind due to having numerous relatives to live with.
In summary, personally, I state that it is not bad for countries to become more similar to another ones due to the ability to purchase the same goods from any region in the world. Each country will have its own uniqueness which will allow it to be differentiated from any country in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in summary, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81547619048 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59592061798 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556547619048 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6924206295 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.090909091 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250965241243 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892871149651 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074696173126 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169293676011 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052580017383 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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