Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.
Big cities in the universe are development fast, as well as their issues. This essay will support this argument by analyzing the merits mentioned below and give some solutions.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of big cities have development fast. Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once young people living in those cities are facing. First, living in cities very costly and especially when people living in big cities that economic it will cost even more. However, you can have earn more money in the city, but the amount of compensation makes you startled, meaning that cost of living in city, salary than in country, bus cost of living also than. The prices of the items are also higher cause due to the large concentration of people and great demand. Second, big cities have development fast so have many job opportunities would tempt many young people including the unemployed or can’t find work in small cities, countries, thereby many people are compete for a top spot. This can make it difficult in asked for a job. Especially when city economic are very highest, you still unemployed although have many job advertising in paper. The daily search, communiting and rental cost will further lead to an economic disadvantage.
Because big cities growing fast so make difficult in many segments for young people, but it is not that there are no solutions to these problem. Right here in this essay, I going to talk about solution that I find reasonable to solve this difficult problem.First, cost of living in big cities is very expensive so there needs to be law about the reasonable cost of living for the city that will reduce the pressure on the people. With this problem, government can reduced living expenses for a certain number of months in a year, if government can do this I think will help many poor people about economic and their life. Second, young people living in city are very easily unemployed because have many compete. This problem, government can allow people to try a job at a company they want and still pay a certain amount but low if they also well then keep them and pay the right salary. They can both compete fairly with the state and have many talented people. In my opinion, I think this is a good path for everyone.
In fact, big cities are development fast both advantages and disadvantages. But, just only know applying development in the right place and people being taken care of will certainly bring many benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...l cost even more. However, you can have earn more money in the city, but the amount ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...t is not that there are no solutions to these problem. Right here in this essay, I going to t...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...hese problem. Right here in this essay, I going to talk about solution that I fin...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...sonable to solve this difficult problem.First, cost of living in big cities is very e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, well, i think, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83179723502 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53846892044 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481566820276 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6178454827 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.85 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298642867577 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102809130859 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871509910016 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178301192812 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615567232832 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.