An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life.
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
We have witnessed that a growing number of people often change their job career and migrate to many different places. In my perspective, this statement has both positives and negatives development.
There are certainly some benefits of changing job career and place of residence. One such benefit is that individuals can broaden their horizons. By simply migrating to other country, individuals can meet new people with different backgrounds. Individuals therefore are able to understand their culture and show respect to others. Another benefit is that migrants are able to obtain more payment fr...
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Sentence: In my perspective, this statement has both positives and negatives development.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to negatives and development
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No. of Words: 278 350
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No. of Different Words: 151 200
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
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