An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life.
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
We have witnessed that a growing number of people often change their job career and migrate to many different places. In my perspective, this statement has both positives and negatives development.
There are certainly some benefits of changing job career and place of residence. One such benefit is that individuals can broaden their horizons. By simply migrating to other country, individuals can meet new people with different backgrounds. Individuals therefore are able to understand their culture and show respect to others. Another benefit is that migrants are able to obtain more payment fr...
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Sentence: In my perspective, this statement has both positives and negatives development.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to negatives and development
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 278 350
No. of Characters: 1376 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.95 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.599 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.353 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.543 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07
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