You would like to take a part-time course at the university, but don't have the money to do it. Write a letter to an organization that supports students financially and asks for help.
In your letter
describe your qualification and degree
provide some details of the course
explain how this course will help you in the future.
Dear Sir,
I am Dhaivat Suthar, writing to request financial aid to undertake a part-time course in Graphic Design at the University of Baroda.
In 2015, I completed my graduation in performing arts and at present, I am working as an assistant dance teacher in a school. Recently, I came across this course, it has an exhaustive curriculum along with hands-on training on a few software tools. The flexibility in course duration and timings are best suited for my requirements. Also, the faculty is a well-known design expert in the domain. However, the course fees are quite high and I can not afford them with my present paygrade.
Since childhood, I was inclined towards sketching and visualisation. This course will help me to pursue my passion and will enable me to work independently as a freelance graphic designer.
I humbly request your esteemed organisation to consider my case for monetary assistance in this regard and I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Dhaivat Suthar
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15757575758 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9969436528 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2964587459 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16400302586 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589673983132 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505506830902 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978649040148 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518714016852 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15757575758 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9969436528 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2964587459 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16400302586 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589673983132 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505506830902 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978649040148 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518714016852 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.