Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody would experience hard situation in their lives. It could be a failure in exam for students or a great breakdown for businessmen. What is important is how they react to this situation. Although there are good arguments in favor of accepting the trauma, others including me would state that it is a better idea to find a solution and get out of that situation.
Some people believe that accepting your bad situation is the best thing to do. Advantage of that would be the peace you gain. For example an employee who stock in a bad situation at his work place would accept that as a general situation and think that everybody had problem with their job unsatisfactory. But the problem is that in these circumstances people wouldn’t try to solve their problem and they got stock in the bad situation for a long time.
On the other hand, there is a good view that states; when life puts you in a bad position it is your job to help yourself out of there. It is undeniable that when you are in a hard situation, acceptance is the first and the most important step. It helps you to consider all aspects of the problem and try to find a solution for it and improve your situation. Otherwise, you start to deny the problem which could be really dangerous and you would stay in that bad position for a long time.
In conclusion, once again I restate my opinion that despite all convincing arguments both for and against the acceptance of bad situation, I personally believe that we have to fight our way out the problems and that is how live is going onward to the happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51567944251 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62373733831 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494773519164 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6552458849 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232352066128 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088076350049 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941291565469 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134073589091 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823309752897 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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