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some people prefer to live in country. others prefer to live in the town or big cities. which do you prefer?

Choosing the best place to settle permanently was a struggle for human beings. Living in big cities or courtiers each has its advantages and disadvantages. Some people prefer to live in big populated cities while others would rather settle in countries. I select big cities because of two reasons.

First of all, I am an introverted person. Living with others and having close relationships with others make me anxious. In small countries, people know each other, and as a result, they interact more than big-city dwellers. For example, my parents live in a small country far away from my home. All of their neighbors are familiar with them. Every afternoon, they hang out in my parents` backyard. It disturbs me a lot, but in my neighborhood, no one knows others; even in my apartment building, my neighbors do not have any communication with me, and I admit it.

Additionally, urban residents have more facilities. City dwellers benefit from a better educational, entertainment, and health care system. After finishing their education, many young people cannot find an appropriate job in countries, so they migrate to cities seeking a job related to their degree. For instance, I migrated to New York five years ago to find a job because I could not find a good one in my hometown related to my engineering degree, but now I am a manager in a big country, and my income is much higher than when I was a shopkeeper in my hometown.

To sum up, I would rather be a city dweller due to my personality characteristics and the better facilities that city residents benefit from. Still, country dwellers even do not have any information about them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8865248227 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98370067109 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2224942361 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224106091573 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759916690722 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104342331604 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146191743856 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115348292119 0.0645574589148 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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