do you agree or disagree? it is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.
Honesty and its importance in relations always have been one
of the most debatable issues in society. While some people believe that being honest with friends is essential in relationships, others think that it is not important at all and they can hide the truth. In my opinion honesty is so important and I have some reasons for that. Telling the truth affects my personality, decreases my stress, and keeps lying. At first being honest make my personal character. My behavior, beliefs and etc... together make my character and social level. Hiding the reality and telling something else instead of that cause that our friends know us as a lire and we lost our situation between them as a trustee.
Secondly, I am a stressful person and hiding something makes me anxious. For example, last month I went on a trip and I hide from one of my friends because I did not like that going trip with him, after that, I was always concerned about that if he recognizes the truth. it will annoy him even if he does not want to be friend with me and it makes me depressed.
Finally, the first lie is so hard to tell but just after the first one, we find out that was not so hard as a result of that, we think about the next lie and continue lying so after a while we hardly ever tell the truth and we change to another person who lies easily to hour friends.
To sum up, I think telling the truth in all situations is the best way, maybe at first lying seems easy and beneficial but after a while, it will have some irreversible effect on our personality and interaction with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ersonal character. My behavior, beliefs and etc... together make my character and social...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... about that if he recognizes the truth. it will annoy him even if he does not want...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4295532646 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42237087053 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7754033539 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1098016771 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452145004389 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053799300811 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603474321918 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440183515949 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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