Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
though the opinion to the editor of the national aeronautics magazine seems sound at the first glance, it seems to have its fallacies at explaining major things as a part of the statement.
The author states that - manned space flights are costly and dangerous. it fails to provide light on what forms the dangerous parts of the whole process. Considering that the whole department of aeronautics works around an expensive infrastructure, rare propellants, costly researches carried out to validate certains theories and hypothesis, just ending the phrase by saying that the flights with humans on them are pricey doesn't cut the deal.
Secondly, the paragraph talks about the recent success of the unmanned space probes and satellites and how these have helped us gain a huge set of useful information without the problems asociated with the manned flights, but it fails to explain two things -
a. it doesn't talk about how much money was spent on the unmanned robots compared to manned ones. hence fails to highlight the quantitative analysis of the problem and solution.
b. it doesn't give any information about the useful information which according to the passage helps. if the information we needed was to know if the oxygen content on a given extraterrestial object and to monitor if plants grow in the surrounding or to understand the behavior of man on space and say for example, if the information we got from the probes was how much is the phosphorous content on the object, though the data received may help, it is superflous to us, having no real significance.
Lastly, investing of the resources should be based on the report of the previous efforts. This opinion doesn't provide any information about the previous effort apart from the ones discussed earlier. There is no information about how much investment is required and how will that be used. it also doesn't
On an ending note, though author tries to entice the reader by saying that the unmanned probes are better than manned space flights, they fail to stress on the points that are required to make the call. Neither do they provide statistical background nor do they provide alternative supporting statements, hence they fail to do a good job in helping the reader understand the opinion.
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- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected However since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations we cannot permit i 23
Comments
e-rater score report
Wrong essay topics
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ???? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1845 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.817 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.7 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.144 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.673 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Though
though the opinion to the editor of the nation...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...space flights are costly and dangerous. it fails to provide light on what forms th...
^^
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... flights with humans on them are pricey doesnt cut the deal. Secondly, the paragrap...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts, but it fails to explain two things - a. it doesnt talk about how much money w...
^^^
Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t fails to explain two things - a. it doesnt talk about how much money was spent on ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...nmanned robots compared to manned ones. hence fails to highlight the quantitative ana...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...nmanned robots compared to manned ones. hence fails to highlight the quantitative ana...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sis of the problem and solution. b. it doesnt give any information about the useful i...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...n which according to the passage helps. if the information we needed was to know i...
^^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t of the previous efforts. This opinion doesnt provide any information about the previ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... is required and how will that be used. it also doesnt On an ending note, though...
^^
Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ired and how will that be used. it also doesnt On an ending note, though author trie...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd how will that be used. it also doesnt On an ending note, though author tries t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01058201058 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75322022487 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.5299202849 57.8364921388 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.70786347227 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0195452203653 0.218282227539 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00775951666792 0.0743258471296 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0158176500478 0.0701772020484 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00868735060022 0.128457276422 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145808955433 0.0628817314937 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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