The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph gives information about the number of people that migrates to and from the United Kingdom in the years1979 to 1999 while the bar graph reveals the countries that were wildly visited by the Britain in 1999 in millions.
Overall, the total numbers of British citizens traveling in and out of UK increased over the years hitting over twenty five millions and fifty millions respectively.It is also seen that the most visited country by the UK residents was France with over twelve millions people while the least visited was Turkey.
To begin, the number of emigrants leaving Britain in 1979 was about twelve millions which gradually increased to 20 millions in 1984 and consistently to over fifty millions in 1999.Whereas the immigrants in 1979 was just exactly ten millions and rose up steadily in 1999.
Interestingly, the emigration of British was more to Spain and France at a value of ten and twelve millions accordingly.The other countries visited are Turkey, Greece and USA with figures of 2.5 millions,3 millions and 4 millions respectively.
- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The pie charts shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest 56
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- The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries the pie chart the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time 67
- The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12571428571 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82380550871 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.5071712881 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 224.25 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.75 22.9334400587 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243570900445 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159719381936 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116781425803 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159719381936 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116781425803 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.2329268293 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.