Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people point out that the government should invest a huge amount of money in scientific research to solve world health problems. In contrast, others argue that the authorities spend not only on science but also on other important fields. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I believe that the government is expected to invest money in all fields in order to help citizens avoid many health troubles effectively and enhance their living standards.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why some people claim that scientific exploration is supposed to concentrate on world health problems to allow residents to live better. First of all, with the development of the world, science plays a vital role in society, there are many vaccines that were developed through a lot of scientific studies. To take the covid 19 as a demonstration, before having the vaccine covid 19, there is an abundance of people who have to deal with it, which causes their health troubles and people inflected with covid 19 can not go to work, which leads them to do not enough money to pay for rent and accommodation as often as they used to. However, thanks to scientific research, residents have been able to prevent disease and it offers people to live comfortably.
On the other hand, I believe that the authorities should pay attention to other crucial areas. To begin with, the governments are expected to invest national spending on environmental protection. In fact, annually, the manufactory discharges toxic gas on a daily basis, which causes people to cope with health troubles such as sinusitis and pneumonia. In addition, the authorities should introduce laws to deter and impose heavy fines on those who damage the forest. They have to pay a huge amount of money as heavy fines for deforestation.
In conclusion, In addition to investing in science, the government should also take responsibility for the environment to allow people to become stronger.
- Some people say that to prevent illness and disease governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Although more and more people read news on the Internet newspapers will remain the most important source of news Do you agree or disagree 84
- It is impossible to help all people in the world so governments should only focus on people in their own countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects they should be compulsory in the high school education To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03058103976 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79577612292 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.064539122 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222057390881 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794036458002 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680574089082 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129850831856 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074975575272 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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